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About Me Member Shadow Deviant niminitzarMale/United States

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Taking a round about to face my logicality, I fail to see my feet flip
As I sit down to read my eyes in the rearview mirror but glance past And watch truth make its attempt at apprehending the litter bug; ...the one that dropped the banana peel You see I couldn't evade, as she played the banana, her clutch - I touch her lips Those graceful voluptuous lips could not exist, not on a face like that; A face that would love me while concealing a mind to destroy me ... all for the sake of a grin
I didn't know &

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Taking a round about to face my logicality, I fail to see my feet flip
As I sit down to read my eyes in the rearview mirror but glance past And watch truth make its attempt at apprehending the litter bug; ...the one that dropped the banana peel You see I couldn't evade, as she played the banana, her clutch - I touch her lips Those graceful voluptuous lips could not exist, not on a face like that; A face that would love me while concealing a mind to destroy me ... all for the sake of a grin
I didn't know & Reciprocal Clone 3
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NIMINITZAR
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Alone AgainAlone again, sitting in front of awareness,
but my back is turned… I know its there, telling me what to do, but cupped hands cover my ears Memories armed with snapshots as evidence but I see only what I choose It surrounds me, chills run deep, but I fake sleep,
and draw the covers closer….

My back is turned I’m looking for you I listen to the ocean I can’t bear the silence Alone Again
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Negative AfterimageNegative Afterimage

A crushing weight of silence falls upon my nights I lay, left to my own awareness,
Left to consider the effects of my cause. My cause, so righteous, so solemn... so destructive Forcing my bed to endure the weight of a person So heavy with grief like a child abandoned to nowhere.
The darkness of the night; a day dream catalyst. Negative afterimages still glow with time,
Wraithlike against the backdrop of a thick dark. Burned in the hand of my mind.
Why does it hold so tightly to the past? Why can’t I reach the present… Negative Afterimage
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Personal Quote: Having an open mind opens doors. Open doors allow me to see pathways rather than blockades.

Email: critical_nature@yahoo.com
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~mrfeelnothing Apr 2, 2008, 11:16:33 AM

quack quack

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~TheVampireHimself Nov 2, 2004, 10:45:28 AM

hmm...ur not going on very often any more

~61dynamic May 12, 2004, 9:18:38 AM

Thanks for the comment

~braceletsofsmoke Mar 25, 2004, 10:28:53 AM

hey, good to hear from you. hope your ok too, i'm fine, and thanks for the comment

`tangledweb Mar 12, 2004, 6:22:52 PM

Wow, thanks for the comment. The reasons I spread out my submissions stem out of neccessity. After I submit something, I like to read the comments, reply to them and whatever favorites I might receive. Also I have a bunch of people on my devwatch, and I like to have enough time to give good comments/critique. I can't do that if I just keep submitting over and over and over again...I wouldn't have time to do the things I really consider the most important.

I'm backlogged about 20 photos to share...they'll be submitted in good time.